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January 30
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Welcome to the world, as stories tell me,
A place beyond mortality.
Where we can let imagination seem,
And hide from reality.

Let your artistry take us to your home,
As we fly past clouds and space.
Find that reality is no real entity,
While drifting to a magic place.

Cause there's no fantastic reality,
Where faeries roam without our dreams.
Just trust us, spread your wings of imagery,
As we flow from here like wild steam.

Find the sword in stone, wield it as it glows.
Make magic roam where we go,
And make a wonderland with skies of green.
Fantasy is what we know.

For when we open our eyes to life again,
We will leave our paradise.
Turning all the dull of grey to an array,
And life shall no longer ice.
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Take a trip with me, into another reality
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Mood: Love ~Pagan-Moon-Dreamer Jan 31, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Very beautiful poem, but one thing real magic is spelled like this "magaick" and not the way you wrote it in santza 4 verse 2.

Other then that really amazing poem. :)
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~Aazdremzol Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the tip, I will change that as soon as possible.
Also thanks, I am glad you like it. ^^
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Mood: Optimism ~Pagan-Moon-Dreamer Feb 9, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
You are very welcome, keep up the great work. I enjoyed reading it. :)
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~Padmelov Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So butaful you know your way around words perficly :)
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~Aazdremzol Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, it took me an hour to make that xD
(Hint: Think of this as a poem about dA and it makes more sense ^^)
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~Padmelov Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah I know what you mean :)

(Yeah it dose lolz)
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